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by The Defender WASC Bloc of Partnership for Sovereignty. . 81 reads.

Partnership for Sovereignty Recommendation: Vote FOR “Commend The Noble Thatcherites”

Commend The Noble Thatcherites

Voting Recommendation: FOR

Reasoning: The proposal “Commend The Noble Thatcherites” seeks to commemorate the work of a highly-esteemed region-builder who established and substantially built a highly notable region - The Union of Democratic States (“the Union”).

The resolution begins by discussing The Noble Thatcherites’s (“Thatcher”) legislative work in the Union - ranging from writing multiple iterations of the regional constitution to assisting other individuals in launching their own legislative careers. Thatcher’s foreign affairs work in the Union is next to be reviewed, with the proposal discussing Thatcher's key role in developing a variety of the Union’s treaties. The draft finishes off by examining other key points of Thatcher’s work in the Union, including their three terms as Prime Minister and their tenure as an early leader of the Union’s defender military.

In terms of overall rhetorical quality, Commend The Noble Thatcherites is a very well-written proposal. Its heavy focus on Thatcher’s early work within the Union easily reveals to the reader just how foundational Thatcher’s work is and rightfully implies that the Union would not be as notable as it is today without Thatcher’s continued care. The resolution’s ability to hit over multiple types of regional work further establishes Thatcher’s labor as well-rounded and encompassing. There is also no doubt that the draft’s various detailed examples fully elucidate its claims in these areas, leaving little ambiguity. The commend thus makes quite a strong case in terms of pure argumentation.

The draft does not lack much in the narrative department either. Its continual hammering of how Thatcher’s early work was extensively vital to the Union’s success - via phrases like “since the very beginning”, “early leadership”, and others - well conceptualizes Thatcher’s region-building work. Furthermore, the repeated mentions of how Thatcher promoted democratic ideals also promptly emphasize how Thatcher crafted the Union’s current identity as a strong democracy. The resolution’s use of intentionally selected phrases to emphasize certain themes - foundational work and identity crafting - expertly colors the extent of influence Thatcher has had in the Union’s development and well-supports the draft’s rhetoric. In all aspects, this resolution is well-crafted.

Furthermore, this resolution represents an important step for the Security Council. Similarly to the just-as-excellent & recently passed Security Council resolution Commend Andusre, Commend The Noble Thatcherites justifies the fact that region-building work in singular regions (specifically UCRs) is absolutely noteworthy. Regionalist region-builders like Thatcher often form the backbone of the communities they reside in - without whom, such communities would not exist and thus without whom NationStates would be less diverse. Yet it is commonly known that commending regionalist region-builders can be a highly difficult endeavor due to the view that the Security Council should commend work more broader in scope than within a single region. In keeping with its goals to promote community building throughout NationStates, the Partnership for Sovereignty expresses its disagreement with this view. Clearly, as shown by Commend The Noble Thatcherites, the labor of regionalists can be just as notable as those who have dedicated their lives in service to many communities.

Thereby, in continuation with its efforts to encourage positive community development, recognize the work of exemplary nations, and motivate the passage of highly well-written proposals, the Partnership for Sovereignty recommends voting FOR “Commend The Noble Thatcherites”.

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