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Wabacha wrote:Bits and bobs of those lyrics came to me on the drive home, been ironing it out for the past two hours. It's one that I find carries more of his story than most of the other ones I've put together. It's also much faster, written more like a rap than a traditional piece. I thought it fits his scrambled mind and heart as he tries to figure out what to do with his life now that his world has been turned upside down and slid 2000 years down the timeline.

How fitting that you wrote it more like a rap, because I read most of it like a rap

Synnadine wrote:How fitting that you wrote it more like a rap, because I read most of it like a rap

I'm glad it came across properly then. You're right that not all of it is rapped.

Now that my work is done, I go to slep.

Wabacha wrote:I'm glad it came across properly then. You're right that not all of it is rapped.

Now that my work is done, I go to slep.

Interesting that you were able to convey that without having to specify it at all, actually.

Synnadine wrote:Interesting that you were able to convey that without having to specify it at all, actually.

Word choice and bar length creates for itself a certain flow which you picked up on.

Otherwise I dunno lol.

Wabacha wrote:Military and political support from Wabacha against the Templars will probably coax a good number of them.

Alot will, like the beast kin and those that have already have good ties with the humans.

Though afew like the Fearies, Drake's and Oni won't. Faeries is simply cause they don't trust Wabacha's intentions. Being sentients who mess and manipulate with time get them alot of distrust. Drakes don't talk to anyone. And Oni, they actually have been dominating the templar attackers, in their eyes they don't need Wabacha or their help.

Whoops, didn't mean to post yet.

Wabacha wrote:Whoops, didn't mean to post yet.

"Yet"? So you mean you were doing a thing?

Synnadine wrote:"Yet"? So you mean you were doing a thing?

Yup very slowly.

Wabacha wrote:Yup very slowly.

I was about to do a thing, then I deleted the thing cause I just fundamentally don't know how to approach any of the things I could do XD

Synnadine wrote:I was about to do a thing, then I deleted the thing cause I just fundamentally don't know how to approach any of the things I could do XD

Morning Sam I'm guessing?

Wabacha wrote:Morning Sam I'm guessing?

That. Or Celecia. Or Crash, Nilin, Colton. Or just Colton, I've trying to think of things for/about him now but I'm realizing I truly have just never given him much thought in terms of character development XD He's still the small time RP character I made when we were in high school, but older and stronger with a new fighting style to match the fact he's much stronger than when he was at creation.

Synnadine wrote:That. Or Celecia. Or Crash, Nilin, Colton. Or just Colton, I've trying to think of things for/about him now but I'm realizing I truly have just never given him much thought in terms of character development XD He's still the small time RP character I made when we were in high school, but older and stronger with a new fighting style to match the fact he's much stronger than when he was at creation.

I have a character that can line up with Celecia, though I'll probably wait until you decide what direction she takes at the moment.

Wabacha wrote:I have a character that can line up with Celecia, though I'll probably wait until you decide what direction she takes at the moment.

I've been on and off brainstorming it for like a week now. She was left off crying in an empty alley of the Metropoli, alone broken and humiliated under heavy rain. Somewhat good to know you have someone you could throw at it though

ZOCOM wrote:Alot will, like the beast kin and those that have already have good ties with the humans.

Though afew like the Fearies, Drake's and Oni won't. Faeries is simply cause they don't trust Wabacha's intentions. Being sentients who mess and manipulate with time get them alot of distrust. Drakes don't talk to anyone. And Oni, they actually have been dominating the templar attackers, in their eyes they don't need Wabacha or their help.

Opening negotiations with the latter three will be difficult, though they probably will agree to deals that maintain their autonomy and minimal Wabachan influence while granting opportunities to have their voices heard in the country's politics.

Wabacha wrote:Opening negotiations with the latter three will be difficult, though they probably will agree to deals that maintain their autonomy and minimal Wabachan influence while granting opportunities to have their voices heard in the country's politics.

Indeed, there's more on the table than just military aid.

Synnadine wrote:Indeed, there's more on the table than just military aid.

I'm working on a song for Crash right now, it's looking to be higher paced than Tobbi's.

Wabacha wrote:I'm working on a song for Crash right now, it's looking to be higher paced than Tobbi's.

Ohhhh interesting

Wabacha wrote:"Well, it doesn't really matter anymore, if this Heimrich guy is to be believed." Tobbi takes a glug of his water before finishing his eggs. "Though if he's gone this far, I don't think he's trying anything shady. Scotti had said he has a technique that was impossible to follow that he could have killed Vengeance with, but he didn't, and he didn't use it again. He probably hates the bug too, since Vengeance was tricking him all these years. I dunno. It's all water under the bridge at this point." He finishes off the half piece of bacon from earlier with a shrug. "We can't stop him from doing his weird sword thing, so there's nothing we can do except see where this all goes."

Samantha didn't look too sure of if Heimrich can be trusted as she scooped up her scrambled eggs and scarfed them down. Having a pretty boisterous manner of eating despite being the one that handled her families official affairs for the last 8 years. "It might be water under the bridge but I still don't trust the guy. He has to get something out of this, no one just does all that on a freebie... The only things I approve of concerning him is the fact he beat up Vengeance, stuck it to that blowhard Salem and potentially brought my real brother back."

Wabacha wrote:Opening negotiations with the latter three will be difficult, though they probably will agree to deals that maintain their autonomy and minimal Wabachan influence while granting opportunities to have their voices heard in the country's politics.

Synnadine wrote:Indeed, there's more on the table than just military aid.

Stuff like that might sway the Oni's but the Faeries and Drakes not so much. The drakes have a pretty well developed society hidden away in the volcanic north western regions beyond the mountains, having a pretty self sufficient society where everyone has their place, technological luxuries that would cheapen it would be seen as a way to undermine their values. And Faeries don't really see the need in technology.

The Oni's, well they're a pretty combat oriented race, so as long as they get the opportunity to fight then they're happy. Getting them to contribute to Zocom's fighting force would be a huge boon, since right now it's just Human soldiers and Orcs mercs.

A group that might not show in person is the Undead, seeing how their leader can't leave their capital and come in person, not unless he uses a created clone.

Wabacha wrote:"They do not fight like raiders, which is worrisome, but because they are not as numerous as the Subterranean Raiders or the other Wasteland groups the army is not focusing on them. Which I don't think is very good. But Damien said not to voice my opinions where there are army people, so I have to be quiet a lot."

"Well sounds like we have a pretty big job on our hands." Aria said.

"Best not to waste time talking."

ZOCOM wrote:Samantha didn't look too sure of if Heimrich can be trusted as she scooped up her scrambled eggs and scarfed them down. Having a pretty boisterous manner of eating despite being the one that handled her families official affairs for the last 8 years. "It might be water under the bridge but I still don't trust the guy. He has to get something out of this, no one just does all that on a freebie... The only things I approve of concerning him is the fact he beat up Vengeance, stuck it to that blowhard Salem and potentially brought my real brother back."
Stuff like that might sway the Oni's but the Faeries and Drakes not so much. The drakes have a pretty well developed society hidden away in the volcanic north western regions beyond the mountains, having a pretty self sufficient society where everyone has their place, technological luxuries that would cheapen it would be seen as a way to undermine their values. And Faeries don't really see the need in technology.

The Oni's, well they're a pretty combat oriented race, so as long as they get the opportunity to fight then they're happy. Getting them to contribute to Zocom's fighting force would be a huge boon, since right now it's just Human soldiers and Orcs mercs.

A group that might not show in person is the Undead, seeing how their leader can't leave their capital and come in person, not unless he uses a created clone.

"Looks like we see eye to eye on that." Tobbi chuckles as he finishes off his bacon.

There's more to international relations than just tech. It's the main thing Wabacha will not be offering them as they would know that such races would see it as more of an insult than anything.

Wabacha wrote:"Looks like we see eye to eye on that." Tobbi chuckles as he finishes off his bacon.

There's more to international relations than just tech. It's the main thing Wabacha will not be offering them as they would know that such races would see it as more of an insult than anything.

Fair enough, though I still say that those two won't be there. Though that doesn't mean they won't be watching, the Faeries in particular since they have good relations with the elves and have taken to sheltering alot of their refugees. And the Oni's leader will likely try to get a fight out of someone before they decide on anything. Unless you're willing to die for it, it isn't worth doing.

With the pace of this one and a mix of ideas it is not polished at all, but it's readable. Probably. Not much I can think of right now to change without having an actual beat to put it to.

Crash before: I am quiet and have done nothing significant.
Crash now:

Take a good long look
It's the last chance you get
The underground's strongest
Is entering the state

I never play nice
It ain't worth the price
Trust is earned not given
You want mercy ask Nilin

My energy is steadily increasing willpower unceasing
My every move is a religion I got charisma that's a given
Reshape the world, image my own you can't break this stone
I am here to make every problem disappear

What are you to a god speed is nothing to me
King of the court averting ragnarok the wins are free
Soul burning Violet energy is turning violent
Sink into the pit I lost my name, winning the blood game

Why do I need to say it? You already know so I'll drop it
Inherited a legacy but not the greed I don't want it
Throw it in the pit it's time to incinerate it
Time to Crash through these barriers it's my name you can't have it!

I'm a Jigsaw! Missing too many pieces!
Don't push me! To finish my patience decreases!
Tensions are rising! The Second I enter the scene!
My Origin! Born on the backs of dying dreams!

It's end of the line got time to start digging
Find the cage kill my friends im all that's left there's no vict'ry
Dig down to the core take my hate and berate my fate
Last day in the playground it's a solo date

~
And I Meditate
~
~

Enter the trance make the attacks mass got no need for class
Got no honor attack from behind betray your trust just like my mother
All I need to end this fast my fists and staff gonna make skulls crack
You shouldn't remind me of home bloodlust will grow no one left to atone!

Dodging the lightning got precog yeah I perfect the timing
Rage giving me the focus creating a breakthrough breaking bones it's a bonus
I am a mountain of modesty gonna say good fight gonna save a soul he earned respite
Getting Dylan's back riding the waves on a stone king of the sea I'm the strongest one!

I am the strongest one!

It's end of the line got time to start digging
Find the cage kill my friends I'm all that's left there's no vict'ry
Dig down to the core take my hate and berate my fate
Last day in the playground it's a solo date

~
And I Meditate
~
~

I am the strongest one!
My word is law the fight is done!
The sun will rise the moon is gone!
This war is won!

~

There's nothing left to do no
I am the strongest one so
You've learned enough from me go
You'll change the Cartier I know

-Meditate

Aeritai wrote:Unknown Sector
It has been 5,000 years ever since Soul King was expelled from the Aeritaian Sector and the lost of his Divine powers. Soul King had been stuck laying down in a large desert in a unknown sector wearing nothing, but ragged clothes as he stares into the sky as the intense heat from the sun burnt his pale skin like it has been for the last 5,000 years. Soul King had lost everything his power, Realm, and most importantly his home sector the Aeritaian Sector he tried so hard to restore balance to his home and yet here he is a disgrace to everyone back home that adored him. All of those things were taken by a mortal by the name of Lucas and Soul King would get his revenge one day, but with him being powerless revenge was impossible forever out of his reach. As Soul King was deep in his thoughts he heard the sound of sand being stepped on as well as a strange noise from some type of animal.

After a while the animal stopped and the sound of someone getting off the animal, Soul King soon heard someone getting close to his body and then he hears a woman's voice.

"Weird spot to be hanging at don't you think?" The woman asked as she stepped closer to Soul King looking down at him.

Soul King soon got a good look at the woman she was a elf with tattoos covering her face and arms, wearing some type of leather armor, her white hair was tied up in a bun, and she had a few freckles on her face.

"Go away.... Let me rot here." Soul King said as he strained to look up at the elven woman.

"Sorry can't do that." The woman said as she got on her knees and placed both her hands on his chest as her tattoos began to light up blue.

"What are you doing?! I said get away and leave me to rot in this forsaken desert!" Soul King said starting to get annoyed with the woman.

The woman simply ignores Soul King's orders as her tattoos continued to glow a even brighter blue. It wasn't long before Soul King's body was completely surrounded by the same bright blue light. After a few minutes had passed the blue light disappeared and all the pain that Soul King had felt in his body was gone and he was able to stand up on his two legs in shock that his broken body was healed. After moving every muscle in his body Soul King looked at the woman with a puzzled look.

"You were able to heal my body?" Soul King asked.

"Yep pretty easy to heal a human... You are human correct?" The woman asked.

"Of course I am.... I was just surprised that type of healing magic before." Soul King explained lying to keep his idenity a secret.

"I'm new around these parts as you can see."

"Makes sense since you got lost in the Desert Of Lost Souls, but no worries there's a town I can take you to where you can get food and drink." The woman said.

"It should only take one day for us to arrive on Komo."

"Komo?" Soul King asked.

"My pet lizard." The woman said as she pointed at a giant lizard.

"Oh excuse me where are my manners? My name is Seralle Briwyn pleased to meet you Mr....?"

"Samuel.... I don't have a last name." Soul King once again lied to keep his idenity a secret.

"A pleasure to meet you Samuel now hop on Komo and we'll head off to town!" Seralle said.

After a day long journey both Soul King and Seralle made to it to a nearby Port Town where ships were currently docking dropping off supplies for the town's people who were elves and humans living together.

"Well Samuel here we are Port Haven." Seralle said as she pat Komo on the head to make him move towards the town.

"They have everything here for you to get settled in and have a comfortable life here."

"Not really looking for a comfortable life, but this town will have to do." Soul King replied as he looked at his surroundings.

"Well its a good thing the boats at the dock provide transportations to other cities that are way bigger than Haven, if you have the money of course to afford transportation." Seralle explained as she parked Komo near a Inn and then getting off to tie Komo to the fence post.

"Now how about we get you some food and drink? And maybe a bath while we're at it."

One Hour Later

After taking a bath and getting a new pair of clothes on, Soul King left his room and entered the main room of the Inn as he sat down at a table by himself to form a plan to get out of this unknown sector and back to the Aeritaian Sector. But just before he could think of anything he is interrupted by Seralle who is holding a plate of meat on it.

"Hey there did not you see me at the other table?" Seralle asked as she handed Soul King the plate.

"Nope I guess my vision is poor..." Soul King lied, in truth Soul King didn't want Seralle to be around him at all preferring to be alone.

"Ah I see! Being in the middle of a desert would do that to ya." Seralle said as she leaned back in her chair.

"So do you have any plans?"

"No as far as I'm concerned I'll be staying here for a while until I earn enough money to go to another city." Soul King explained as he took a bite out of the one meats on his plate.

"Well you can always be a farmer I hear they make great money in this town!" Seralle said.

"The farming life does not suit me look let me finish my meal in peace and I'll think of something." Soul King said.

"Alright that's understandable I'll be outside feeding Komo, so if need me as a tour guide again I'll gladly show you around." Seralle said as she got up from her seat and went outside leaving Soul King alone.

Finally she's gone... Soul King thought to himself as he sighed in relief as he started to think of a plan.

Those boats may be my only hope of return to the Aeritaian Sector... Even then Lucas is far more powerful than I am for me to deal with him and his friends. There has to be some way to gain some power that can rival Lucas.

((Soul King is also open for RP as well! If anyone is interested in introducing a character who knows about Soul King and what he's done))

Well between you two plothooks, I think it's a bit obvious which one I'll be aiming for. Though I can't do much more tonight, going to be busy for most of the night.

ZOCOM and Aeritai

ZOCOM wrote:Samantha didn't look too sure of if Heimrich can be trusted as she scooped up her scrambled eggs and scarfed them down. Having a pretty boisterous manner of eating despite being the one that handled her families official affairs for the last 8 years. "It might be water under the bridge but I still don't trust the guy. He has to get something out of this, no one just does all that on a freebie... The only things I approve of concerning him is the fact he beat up Vengeance, stuck it to that blowhard Salem and potentially brought my real brother back."

"I guess we see eye to eye on that," Tobbi lets out a chuckle as he finishes his breakfast. The conversation is a little heavy sure, but when was the last time he was able to relax and eat with someone? That wasn't Scotti anyways. "We'll just wait and see, and if we gotta we can just kick his teeth in." With a common use of aura he cleanses his plate while he takes another sip of his water. "What are you going to do if it is your brother?

OOC: Separated it so it's easier to see, and added a bit more.

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