by Max Barry

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Region: the Pacific

Velvets realm

The Municipalities of Antarctica wrote:Certainly, here you go:

"leaving a insane shivering wreck of a human being"
Fix: "leaving an insane shivering wreck of a human being"

"Suddenly all hell breaks loose a humungous foreign vehicle identified as HDDT-013"
Fix: "Suddenly all hell breaks loose as a humongous foreign vehicle identified as an HDDT-013"

"which sends his limp body tumbling down onto a flight of stairs in a world of agony as the ballad of gunshots, explosions, and screams becomes ever louder as his tum bling body down goes nears the ground faster,"
Fix: "which sends his limp body tumbling down a flight of stairs in a world of agony as the ballad of gunshots, explosions, and screams becomes ever louder as his tumbling body nears the ground,"

Thanks for the help, I have the spelling problems fixed now. Also, I would like to ask you the same question (what is your interpretation of how my nation deals with the topic of extremism and free speech) that I asked Wubby before he went for bedtime, if you have the time and don't mind.

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