The PacificBoard

Cohuila Y Tejas wrote:

So I have British, Italian, German, and French Battleships and Battlecruisers memorized. I have most Japanese and some US memorized.

I would do carriers but there were around 200 commissioned before and during the war. I would do WW1 Battleships but there were much much much more.

_{^{Send help please I beg of you}}

i send you google docs to list your vast knowledge...

Bucre wrote:

Stop lying,we're very similar

Check that bar with the line graphs. You got a higher black market and a worse economy.

Bucre wrote:

Ego there,

Compare our populations and our stats.

anyhoo.. GN pacific!

Strala wrote:

Even now it's pathetic. Also really killing tens of millions in the late 5th century? He killed more than 10% of the population and conquered the world? That's not very believable, especially uniting the world under one ruler. Also, even tens of millions are pathetic compared to us.

The Roman Empire tried and failed. So did Iskandar and the other great conquerors.

Bucre wrote:

What? I don't control that many peopl

RP rules. People with under 50million population....I dunno, it's confusing for me. What we're trying to say is, your nation seems just a tad overpowered in its lore.

Bucre wrote:

I'll change years

That doesn't really fix the problem...

Velvets realm wrote:

Thanks for the help, I have the spelling problems fixed now. Also, I would like to ask you the same question (what is your interpretation of how my nation deals with the topic of extremism and free speech) that I asked Wubby before he went for bedtime if you have the time and don't why mind.

Of course. I'll awaken my thinking mind for this.

What I seem to notice here, is that the country seems to have tolerated Drim's antics for quite some time, enough so that he has become infamous for his actions and reactions to such things.
It seems like nothing was really done about him up until he took it upon himself to try and cause something to happen.
The moment he mobilized an armed force, and decided to physically take over a building belonging to the state, that is when it appears that the country's government had enough of him.

What I take away from this, is that Free Speech is a tolerated right, but that doesn't mean you are free to act in any way that you'd like. The moment that Free Speech becomes 'Extremism' in such a way that it incites action, is where the state seems to snap it's fingers and have things crushed from there.

I have a hundred religious zealots of Umbreon I wish to send someone else to employ into their army. Any takers?

Bucre wrote:

I want it to be realistic

you may want to start by not having such a gruesome backstory?

Bucre wrote:

I'm not flexing on you,

Well, why else do you have a factbook filled with millions of the dead foes of your nation?

Bunnies wrote:

(I also don’t know if Kathol rift would be interested in this? If you’re not, sorry for pinging you!)
Usually when authors try to slip into the mind of someone in third person they let the pronoun hang like this, “The commando was given a chocolate cake after the integration, a sugary treat that was frosted to perfection. The cake floated on the tongue and—oh! The texture gliding from one side to the other—it is truly divine, how could anyone make something so tasty? There must be more somewhere, anywhere! Maybe the chef’s around...”
I mean, how Kathol wrote is was good too! His way leaves more mystery in what the Commando might be thinking and is probably better for that whole “feral” feeling.

That is an excellent point Bunnies, and for a lot of my writing, I do go into the character’s mind much more, but you are also absolutely correct with the feeling I was going for. My goal was to have the whole thing feel detached, like his entire persona was reduced the bare bones of identity, and he was removed from his mind.